Hi Jasreet, I'd like to try out your pizza recipe! Remember that a list of ingredients will tell the reader how much they need, e.g. 250g pizza dough, 1 cup of grated cheese. Think about the actions you would need to do with each ingredient and start with that word, e.g. Roll out the pizza dough. See what changes you can make to your recipe to improve it :-)
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Hi Jasreet, I'd like to try out your pizza recipe! Remember that a list of ingredients will tell the reader how much they need, e.g. 250g pizza dough, 1 cup of grated cheese. Think about the actions you would need to do with each ingredient and start with that word, e.g. Roll out the pizza dough. See what changes you can make to your recipe to improve it :-)
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